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I found it under the couch.  Perhaps
it was taking a nap there, neglected
among the feral dust beasts.  I heard
the metal clink as it was roused,
the vacuum choking on the shell
of plastic like a wounded animal.  
I picked it up, felt its pebbled skin
against my fingertips.
I remembered the shirt,
its mate - how it used to fit alongside
its brothers, dutiful and plain,
but in the heat of the moment
torn and tossed aside, your hands
in a clumsy frenzy against my breast.
I imagine the sharp pain of release,
the long, arcing flight across
the livingroom - it landed on its
flat, sullen face and skittered
under the sofa.
By then we had fallen to our desire,
the bedsprings creaking to echo
our lust.  I wonder
if the button watched us, hurt and forgotten,
blamed us, like a child blames his parents
for casting him out of the womb -
a voyeur with empty eyes, broken thread
for nerves, and no voice to cry out
Stop, how could you,
You're making a mistake.
©2003-2009 `sixhours
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Author's Comments

Inspired after reading The Unswept Room by Sharon Olds and by a line from one of my other poems - "you are ... the three lost buttons."

This is something light and fluffy - a change from the neon green of my cross-processing endeavors as of late.

And I wanted to use "dust beasts" in a sentence. So here ya go.

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:iconshimmasta:
so detailed and perfect don't change a word.

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"all these mixed emotions we keep locked away like stolen pearls; stolen pearl devotion we keep locked away from all the world." -Savage Garden

hey you guys this person is new and he be jammin check out his art oky?

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:iconlivingbyair:
wow.

this. this is amazing. the tie between the relationship and the button being attached to the shirt, the consequence of one's actions, the metaphors the power.

this is the best poem i've read that appeals to me in a long time.

*gets on one knee

will you marry me!?

+fav
:iconjo-kr:
Very interesting perspective. Great way with words, any excuse to insert "feral dust beasts". Very good

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And yet who can say how soon it may all vanish from our lives?
:iconchilipalmer:
Perfect. I love it!! +fav

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<insert signature here>
:iconprideofthepacific:
all its missing is a

To: prideofthepacific

in the desc. haha

thanks.

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porn
:iconprins:
just wow, i really love the way you pulled that all together.

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don’t forget to enjoy today before it's gone an' faded away
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Show me the way to button up buttons who have forgotten they're buttons.


Sorry, reminded me of that line sung by tori.

You know, you best hide that talent of yours, cause one night I'm gonna take it while you're sleeping. Heart

This was beautiful dear.

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Look. Pink bunnies.
:icondelphoric:
OMG this is amazing. Instant Fav! Wow! By far the best poem i have read in a long time.
:iconlosttruth:
...bloody amazing.
i love the whole concept of the lost button.
i have a strange thing for collecting the ones that i see on the street...(i'm not crazy or anything, oh no;) (Wink) )

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